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I have just read it. I think there are a couple of major errors that an editor should have picked up and that show that the manuscript wasn't ready to be published.

1. Perkins explains that Mann tried to get rid of a film reel in order to avoid being connected to the murder, but this is not possible, as the murder had not happened yet when he got rid of the reel at the gas station.

2. Perkins asks Jason to organize his evening with three meetings at 7, 8 and 8:30. These times are not kept at all but still it is said that they were "right on time" when they get to the last one. I think the times should have been 6, 7 and 7:30 - that may have worked.

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